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TLK3: Shadows
Chapter 3, Pg 46

"...it was as if some terrible curse had been lifted from the land..."

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Cool! I love the work of this page! can't wait for the next!!!! :excited:

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wow this is gripping and awesome (is hungry for more)

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Still loving it C:

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Life! I've been missing TLK III!


To offer a little bit of critique, though, one thing you might have to pay more attention too is the relation of the spine. Just in that panel where the female is turned, the spine and hind limbs are curving down in excess. This makes it look like either her forepaws are on a higher surface, or her hind legs are unusually short.
If her paws are supposed to be on a higher level then the anatomy is fine, but it's hard to tell, and in the future you might want to focus on making it clearer that this is how her paws are positioned. Perhaps by using a texture/color change from the rest of the backdrop around the front paws. Such as if a lion was pulling itself from a stream in a grassland, there might be sand beneath the front paws and sharp ripples on the hind.
Sorry, though, if I misinterupted the lioness's placement in that panel.

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Yay more, awsomeness as always^^

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swwweeettt!! i love it how you make her think! is he realy MUfasa's son? that was so cool! and i also love how you have her not recognize anything because of the grass. that was awsome! i bet you just wanted her to be and remain lost.DONT YOU??!?! lol. fantastic art as always:D
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great page, as always.
I LOVE the lightning. It's fantastic.

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yes, she is standing on a rise that is elevating her front half, so her bottom half is indeed lower. (this is often done to survey the area.) thank you for noting that detail! usually people miss things like that. :love:

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well i really cant have her wandering around in circles, now can i? stay tuned... =)

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